Critique the Aina mun pitää lyrics! (Finland 2015)

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Critique the Aina mun pitää lyrics! (Finland 2015)

Viesti Kirjoittaja akuankka13 »

Here you are free to express your shameless opinions about the competing lyrics...






































































































































...mutta vasta kun olet äänestänyt!
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Re: Critique the Aina mun pitää lyrics! (Finland 2015)

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My English is so rusty... I try to write just very short comments.

Happiness
Weird, sarcastic, funny, sad... I liked it! :heh: The contrast between those words and the song was hilarious.

No we don't
Perfect! :rofl: I can't say anything else. It just was... the winner. I hope.

We Are Moronic
This was also excellent. :peukku: I like all of these! How can I choose between them...? :parku:

Religion
My own. I tried to be punk. :puna: This sucks, I know it...
Meow cat, please meow back.

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Re: Critique the Aina mun pitää lyrics! (Finland 2015)

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Here are my comments shortly.

1. Happiness
Fluent text but come on - this is PUNK. The controversion between positive text and genre-expectation doesn't work. Full of interesting words, such as diapers or condensed milk. :joojoo:

2. No we don't
Text is filled with stimulation to all senses, and that's good. Especially thanks for salty liquorice. :peukku:

3. We Are Moronic
Text contains some social critic and I'm sharing it with pleasure. Still, I'm missing some moronic passion or even rage here. :miettii:

4. Religion
Now we have some attitude! And the author definitely have a point. :termari:
If I was an astronaut, I’d be floating in mid-air
But I’m only human, and I’m crashing down to earth

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